2024-05-26 05:32:11 | 留学摆渡人
Dear Tom,
I’ve finally made up my mind to go to America for further study after graduation. I’ve been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I want to experience American culture, which is believed to be the most diverse in the world, and the other is that I hope to broaden my horizon in this developed country. But to tell you the truth, I have some worries about this. I don’t have a good command of English, especially spoken English, so I’m afraid I’ll have difficulty fitting in very soon. Besides, I may suffer from high pressure from college courses, which I’m not sure I can handle. With so many things bothering me, I hope you can offer me some practical advice. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua |
试题分析:考查 应用文 中的书信的写作。要求向你的笔友Tom写一封 电子邮件 。介绍你想去美国留学的原因和现在的困惑,并向对方征求意见。要点都已经给出,注意本文使用 一般现在时 ,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。句式上要富有变化, 简单句 和复杂句结合使用,还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来,象for instance, Furthermore,等词,这样文章显得更连贯。 【亮点说明】One is that I want to experience American culture, which is believed to be the most diverse in the world, and the other is that I hope to broaden my horizon in this developed country.这句话用了并列句, 表语从句 和定语从句, I don’t have a good command of English, especially spoken English, so I’m afraid I’ll have difficulty fitting in very soon.这句话用了词组“have a good command of”精通,和 结果状语从句 ,I may suffer from high pressure from college courses, which I’m not sure I can handle.这句话用了 非限制性定语从句 , With so many things bothering me, I hope you can offer me some practical advice.这是with复合结构。还有文章还使用了 关联词 But to tell you the truth, Besides,使文章更加连贯。 |
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